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Please correct my grammatical lyst, so there is no grammatical mistake:

Va rog frumos sa imi corectati corect gramatical acesta compunere,sa nu fie nicio greseala gramaticala :

Hi! My name is Mariana, I'm from the town of Barlad, a small town, but very cheerful. I am currently studying at the high school, Alexandru Ioan Cuza in Barlad. In my spare time I like to walk with friends and play Counter-Strike Global Offensive, Grand Theft Auto San Andreas and The Forest. I can say that I am a sociable, friendly and devoted person. In the future I would like to attend medical school in Iasi because my sister is a doctor and inspires me. I consider myself a good person who understands people's mistakes, I am an open person. I have two favorite seasons: winter and summer. I train at a football club "Zimbru Barlad" I play as a defensive midfielder and I love this position. Although I don't practice them at the performance level, I've tried to keep myself fit and have fun by these means. I think there are some situations where I am extremely upset, especially when I am right, but my opinion is rejected. About my city I can say guaranteed that it is a small town, with beautiful, respectful and serious people. I like to listen to music when I play on PC or when I do the job through the garden, I usually like to listen to different types of music like: rap , manele (very rarely), dubstep, etc. . My favorite artists are: Snoop Dogg, Chelu, Edy Talent, Killa Fonic, Borgore, Marshmello. As hobbies would be cycling and also gaming. I do not practice a high level gaming, hurtce the game that allows me PC.


Răspuns :

Răspuns:Din cate am vazut nu ai nicio greseala gramaticala, daca este inseamna ca nu am vazut eu bine.Nu ma raportati nu fac asta pt puncte!

Hi!My name is Mariana.Im from the town Barland , its a small town , but is very cheerful. Im currently studying at the Alexandru Ioan Cuza high school.In my spare time i like walking with my friends and play Counter-Strike Global Offensive , Grand theft Auto San Andreas and also The Forest.I can say that im a sociable , friendly and devoted person. In the future i would like to attend  medical school in Iasi bc my sister is a doctor and inspires me..... Sorry i didnt have time to do everything hopefully is good enough.